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creatures of the deep

       😱Creatures of the deep😱 I was working at a building site next to the ocean. A couple of hours later I felt the ground moving. I thought it was a earthquake, I didn’t worry too much.   Then I see tentacles coming out from deep deep below. The rubble was moving like a rocket taking off. I am so scared. I got to see my friends, but they are NOWHERE TO BE SEEN!!!!!!! I can feel my hands shivering in fear. My body is numb, my face is red. I think it will explode. I wonder if they will ever come back for me. The tentacles dragged me into the salty water. I screamed at the top of my lungs. I felt my blood rushing through my  veins. It was dragging me deeper and deeper. I wonder if it will be my last breath??

2014 Writing Term 4

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2014 Writing Term 4 An awesome author uses finger spaces, capital letters and punctuations.    They also give their story a title, use different sentence beginnings and they use ‘wow’ words and lots of Fast Words. Student reflection on Oaklands 50 th  Jubilee:

2014 Term 4 Maths

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2014 Term 4 Maths I am learning to: Solve simple + and - problems by counting all the objects in my head,  to 10 and to 20

2014 Term 4 Reading

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2014 Term 4 Reading In my group I am learning to predict, clarify words I do not understand, ask questions and summarise the text in my own words. Mrs Bergmann: What do good readers do? Student Voice: If they get stuck on a word they sound it out and try again.

2014 Term 4 Music

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2014 Term 4 Music Students are given the opportunity to experiment with a musical instrument and playing different simple music pieces that could then be built on to create a larger unit incorporating the skills learnt. Student Voice: I like to play the recorder because I can play it very well.

2014 Discovery Term 4

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2014 Discovery Term 4 WALT  - to use our Key Competencies during Discovery. Student Voice  - " I am being creative and relating to others during  Discovery by creating a mask out of paper".

2014 Term 3 Writing

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2014 Term 3 Writin g We are learning to: write a description use an iPad or Mac laptop to publish our writing read our writing in a clear voice in front of an audience We can do this when we can:   use interesting words, write sentences that make sense, use describing words and edit and read our work. Teacher Comment:   You have used some describing words.  Your next step is to add more describing word to your writing. I like the way you story created a picture in my mind.