Writing Term 4
                   I am learning to:  Describe a sea creature from the story  Commotion in the Ocean. 
     What I need is:    Describing words   What the animal is   What the animal looks like   What the animal does     Shark                 Shark’s top fins wobble and wobble. Sharks have sharp, white teeth.  It lives in a cave and it hunts for fish.     Bella        
